Donmai

Translation request thread

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Conhowdeiser20 said:

post #3524064:

Does someone mind checking my translation? I'm asking mostly about the second sentence of the rightmost speech bubble: "こんなにエチエチな躰になって悪い子じゃ..!"

My translation is "You bad girl, look how naughty your body is...!"

That's mostly good. It's mostly just なって that needed to be put in.

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