Back at it again then
MrLight said:
What is the problem with this image?
post #3060162
Not that much in my opinion. The chairs are oddly elongated giving Leolouch abnormally long legs. Some items are more detailed than others suggesting the artist used pre existing assets to make the background. Still the image as a whole is quite good and the concept is interesting. I would have approved this if I had the power to.
shikonsa said:
I have 7 deleted posts that are higher quality official sources (blog of the person who commissioned the art) from art that already was posted here:
post #3111788
post #3111796
post #3111797
post #3111798
post #3111800
post #3111801
post #3111804
Is there something I should I be doing different, or should I just quit uploading replacement art when I find better sources?
Pretty much yes. You should only upload replacement art if the quality is "good enough" for Danbooru. Those original images where uploaded five years ago when the threshold was lower than today. These images are unlikely to survive if sent back to the mod queue, the first one has already been flagged and deleted (although the flag reason was invalid).
Repeating what I said in my last post in this thread: Danbooru is an art repository that allows pornographic art but sexually explicit images are less likely to be approved than other images. The more cum and slime in an image the less chance really, though there are approvers that like it many are turned away. The phimosis futa penis in the second image is particularly grose.
The futas in the third image has baseball bat penises and their sweat drops are coloured as their skin even when hanging out from it.
Same sweat problem in the fourth image and the girls in the background have no eyes.
The fifth post has bad penises, bad hands, Miqo'tes crotch and especially face are bad. I flagged the child post for review.
Sixth, same problems I mentioned above and Alteras cock seems to be penetrating Manuxs but cheek. I flagged one of these to.
Seventh post is a little better. Once again there is the weird skin coloured slime sweat. The lineart throughout these images is quite rough. Most Approved posts from this artist are a bit better in that regard.
Still, I understand why someone would think this would get trhough, given what else is approved from this artist.
maulo123 said:
why didnt approved this post?
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3109689
Because it isnt very good?
Sorry, thats not helping.
The whole image looks slightly blurred or unfocused. There is no shading outside the girls faces and hair. There is very little detail beyond the "magic" effect. Turning Marvel superheroes into anime girls is really not an interesting concept.
Entweihen said:
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3115464
Would be interested to know why this was deleted.
Any bit of criticism is helpful because there are certain things I miss, and it will go a long way for comms to come.
Other than what Elvaleon said, the screentone is very obvious when the image is viewed at full size. Is this a scan? Grayscale is a bit of a risk, an approver might have just approved some well coloured images when confronted by a black and white one and find it inferior to what they are "used to".
More BDSM has been deleted in the last month than the months before. Perhaps some mod has stopped approving such posts.
Useless said:
Not the one who uploaded it but why did post #3054089 got deleted?
Balloon tits and a big ass, not grounds for deletion but many approvers dislike it. Though technically rating:q the slime and the "flesh thing" makes it look like a rating:e post. The colouring is good but the lineart is subpar, especially on the flesh thing and the wall. The image is also kinda small compared to most that get uploaded today.
Skydragon0 said:
Out of the nine that I've uploaded, these six were deleted:
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2997612
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2792987
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2701842
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2701800
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2698168
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2719567
Is there anything wrong?
Il answer but asking for critique on six posts is a lot.
1: Its quite pixelated in places. Their breasts are round like beach balls. Blond girl has her but disconnected from her torso (I have seen worse, but many little things add up). The background seems to be a separate layer and does not "touch" the girls. Colouring is quite simple. Not a terrible image but not good enough for Danbooru.
2: Thats not what a bent forward torso looks like. Was the artist looking at a dog for anatomical inspiration? Purple hair girls got her upper body shifted to the right compared to her hips. The inset with the pussy and dildo looks downright unnatural. Blue hair girl has a weird neck. I could go on but really this is a bunch of artistic/anatomical mistakes that combine to make an inferior image. The no nose or lips style isnt liked by everyone.
3: Small, kinda blurry sketch. Bad breasts, a bad nose and purples head is not attached to her shoulders. This is rubbish.
4: Its easier to list the things that arent bad in this image (purples face and scarf, blacks hand and hair). This is a simple meme sketch made with little effort. Not high quality art. There is a place for memes on Danbooru but there are close to five hundred special feeling (meme) posts already.
5: Dear gods what is going on with their hips? I kinda like the image other than that but that anatomy isnt remotely human.
6: Nothing terribly wrong here but also not much that is good. Photo background arent well liked by many mods. The adult girl has a misplaced nose though this isnt immediately apparent. Mostly I think this was just a mediocre image that didnt catch any approvers attention.
I hope I dont sound to harsh here. Most users get deleted uploads before they learn what is appreciated on the site. Keep at it.
Kyusey said:
post #3126126
post #3126128
post #2004901
post #3126128: Kiyohime has a very long left arm if she can reach around Fujimaru like that. Kiyohime looks kinda flattened. The tape does not seem to be drawn the same way as the rest of the image. Still I believe this could have been approved on a slow day. The chains in the parent post are really poorly drawn.
As for the third post. The disconnected torso. The weird hair ball. The text covering much of the image. What even is that thing on her head. And ofcourse its explicit. There really isnt much good about this image at all.
Please read a few other posts in this thread to learn what is appreciated before you post again.